Thu 8 Jul 2010
Jisne humko chaha, use hum chah na sake,
Jisko chaha usae hum pa na sake,
Yeh samajh lo dil tutne ka khel hai,
Kisi ka toda aur apna bacha na sake,
Ek aur sher sunata hoon——-
Manzilein bhi uski thi, raasta bhi uska tha;
Ek hum hi akele thei, kafilaa bhi uska tha;
saath chalne ki soch bhi uski thee, Fir raasta badalne ka faisla bhi uska tha;
aaj akele hain…dil sawaal karta hai…
Log to uske the, …kya khuda bhi uska tha????
This is Jeet, may be your new friend.
Reply zaroor karna.
July 8th, 2010 at 10:25 PM
Its good
July 8th, 2010 at 11:41 PM
Its really ausum very touching.
July 9th, 2010 at 12:49 PM
truly jeet all the lines r superb and last two really heart touching
July 9th, 2010 at 12:53 PM
Its really good//////////
July 9th, 2010 at 1:56 PM
khudi ko ko kar buland itna ki har tahreer se pahle khuda
bande se yah punche bata teri raja kya hai
ye apne sabad hai yar jispe ham apni jindgi
bayan karte hai
agar karo ge reply to ham ange bhi kuch bayan karte rahenge
July 9th, 2010 at 9:53 PM
hi its very nice shayari
tum doosroko samajna sake
tumhe doosre samajna sake
hum sab deekhne ke alava
alla ke khel me koi kuch na kar sake
July 10th, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Kissie Ne hums pucha Ki yadoo our vado me kiya fark hota he humne bus itna hi kaha Ki vade insane Tod dete he our wade insane KO Tod date he
July 10th, 2010 at 7:01 PM
hi frnd, khuda usi ka hota hai jiska koi nahi hota hum har dum sath chalte hain magar phir bhi akele reh jate hain, agar aapke gum se kisi ko khushi mile to acha hi hai, tumhe is baat se khush hona chahiye ki tum kisi tarha to uuse khush kar hi sakte ho
July 13th, 2010 at 12:21 PM
Really Good One…Keep writing…
July 15th, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Kabhi roke muskuraye, kabhi muskurake roye
Uski yaad jab bhi aayee, Usko bhula bulake roye
Ek Uska hi naam tha jise hazaar baartha likha
Jise khush hue the likhkar use mita mitake roye………….
July 15th, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Log to apna banake chodd dete hai..
Kitnee aasani se Log gairon se rishta jod lete hai…
Hum ek phool tak na tod sake kabhi…
kuch log to berahmi se dil bhi tod dete hai……..
July 15th, 2010 at 10:35 AM
Bewafai ki kya dava hai yaroo!
Kush kismati uski jiski
Mayyath nikli mehboob ki gali se…………
Badkismati uski jiski
Mehboob ki baraath nikli uski gali se………….
July 15th, 2010 at 10:38 AM
Us bewafa ne mujhe pyar karke bhi chhod diya,
mujhe akela kar tanhaiyon se naata mera jod diya,
jab aayi mout apni to usse raha na gaya,
aaya vo laas par meri or mujhe bina jalaye hi chhod diya…………
July 16th, 2010 at 10:54 AM
HI JEET ITS VERY NICE. ITS REALY TOUCHING MY HEART. JEET I THINK YOU ARE VERY DEEP THINKING BOY . AND YOU UNDERSTAND EVERYONE . JEET PLS KEEP IT ON
July 17th, 2010 at 7:50 AM
Dosti ka pehala salaam aapke naam,,,,,,,,,,
Hamaari zindagi ki akhari sham aapke naam.
Iss safar main humsafar hain hum dono,,,,,,,,,
Is dosti ko nibhana hain aapka kaam………..
July 17th, 2010 at 7:00 PM
jakkash
July 19th, 2010 at 9:47 PM
Kya dard diya hai bhai. Awesome shayari hai…
July 22nd, 2010 at 4:25 PM
hi dear so sweets bahut achhi shayri hai…
July 22nd, 2010 at 4:27 PM
so sweest
July 22nd, 2010 at 5:05 PM
ja bewaffa tere wade ka aitebar nahi
tere sine me dil hai magar pyar nahi
July 22nd, 2010 at 5:06 PM
laga kar phool ki dali jhuka kar tod n lena
laga ke dard ka rishta nigahen mod na lena
July 22nd, 2010 at 5:08 PM
pyar karne ke bhi kuch aadab hua karte hai
band aankho me bhi kuch khawab hua karte hai
har koi rokar bataye yeh zroori nahi
khusk aankho me bhi kuch khawab hua karte hai
July 23rd, 2010 at 10:15 AM
good sayari
July 24th, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Jeet, that was really very touching… go ahead man .. Best of luck
July 24th, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Khuda ne bhi saath dia unka
jamana bhi jinke saath tha,
Hum akele reh gaye is jamane ke kaafile me
jab ki bewafai ka kafila humare saath tha….
July 24th, 2010 at 6:35 PM
bohat khubsurat ashaar hain
July 26th, 2010 at 3:21 PM
it really hurts……..
qasid payamay shoq ko itna na kar taweel,kehna faqt un say ye k aankhain tars gaen……..
July 26th, 2010 at 3:23 PM
Meri Sab Koshishen Nakaam Thi Un Ko Manane Ki…
Na Jane Kahan Say Seekhi Hain ZAALIM Ne Adayen ROOTH Jane Ki..?
July 27th, 2010 at 7:01 PM
Khwabon se kabhi nikal kar bhi dekho,
Hakikat ki duniya me gujar kar bhi dekho,
Ye such hai ki raftar hi jindgi hai,
Magar jindgi hai kya?Jara thahar kar bhi dekho
July 27th, 2010 at 7:09 PM
Mat Hawa Do Aag ko Bujhane Ke Bahane!
Mat Kuredo Jkhmon Ko Marhum Lagane Ke Bahane!
Jab Tere dosti ke Layak nahi the hum!
Fir Kyun Yaad Karte Ho Humko Bhulane Ke Bahane!
July 27th, 2010 at 7:13 PM
Ek patthar se dil laga kar dekha hai humne!
Chhalakte aankhon se muskura kar dekha hai humne!
Tum tute hue dil ki baat karte ko,
Kisi ke aankho ke Kajal ke liye khud ko jala kar dekha hai humne.
July 27th, 2010 at 7:22 PM
Her khata her julmon-sitam ko humne dua samjha !
Logon ne ishq ko khuda kana,
fir kya bura huajo humne unko khuda samajha!
July 27th, 2010 at 7:25 PM
Ye Khata hai meri ki Hum nahi bhula pate hain tujhko !
Pal-Pal yad kar gun gunate hain tujhko !
Tumhi ek dost ho mere is berhum duniya me !
Tabh to itna satate hain tujhko !
July 27th, 2010 at 7:28 PM
Naaz dosti par hum kiya karte hain !
Her saans lene se pahle tujhe yaad kiya karte hain 1
Hota hoga khud koe hume kya?
hum to bas tera naam liya karte hain !
July 28th, 2010 at 6:57 PM
Its good
August 1st, 2010 at 10:23 PM
kamlesh says……….exelent but yaar kudiya te bassa owadiya reniya………..
August 5th, 2010 at 7:41 PM
Mere Dosto..
Thoda Soch Samaz Ke Pyaar Karna
Kyunki
Kisi Shayar Ne Kaha Hai Ki..
Ye ishq nahin asan ye tohfa hai khuda ka,
bandhan hai ye dilon ka ye hakikat hai zindagi ka,
ye ishq nahin asan ye nasha hai Mohabbat ka,
Ye jaan hai iss dil ka arman hai ye zindagi ka..
August 7th, 2010 at 6:10 PM
koi khushiyon ki chaah me roye,
koi dukhon ki panah me roye,
ajid silsila hai ishq aur mohobbat ka,
koi wafa ke liye roye,aur koi wafa karke roye.
abhi 9837629300
August 7th, 2010 at 6:10 PM
Do pyar karne walo se jalte hai log,
tarah-tarah ki baatein karte hai log,
jab chand aur suraj ka hota hai khulkar milan,
to use bhi grahan kahte hai log.
abhi9837629300
August 7th, 2010 at 6:11 PM
iss kadar agar yaad aaoge hume,
toh kaise bhul aaoge hume,
jab jayenge ye jahan chhod kar hume,
tab kya khuda se maagh paaoge hume.
abhi 9837629300
August 7th, 2010 at 6:11 PM
Zindgi ek juya hai ise harna nahi,
zindgi pal do pal ki mehman hai ise gawana nahi,
u he chalte jana rukh jana nahi,
hamesha yaad rakhna hame bhulana nahi.
abhi 9837629300
August 7th, 2010 at 6:11 PM
Thukra de koi to dil tut jata hai,
Tod deti hai yadain jab koi apna hi samajh nahi pata hai,
sach kehte hai duniya wale.
insaan dimag se nahi dil se haar jata hai.
abhi 9837629300
August 7th, 2010 at 6:13 PM
Aapki dosti hmari suron ki saj hai,
aap jaise dost par hume naaz hai,
Chahekuch v ho jayein zindagi me,
dosti kal v waisi hi rahengi jaisi aaj hai.
abhi 9837629300
August 7th, 2010 at 6:14 PM
Hum chale tere dar se khamoshiyan lekar,
pal-palro pda dil siskiyan lekar,
hans rahe the jo mere dubne par,
wo hi nikle hai meri talaash mei kashtiyan lekar.
abhi 9837629300
August 7th, 2010 at 6:15 PM
Barbad kar gaye jindgi wo zindagi pyar ke naam pe,
bewafai mili hume wafa ke naam pe,
aise jakhm de gaye wo dawa ke naam pe,
khuda bhi ro pada meri mohobbat ke anjaam pe.
abhi 9837629300
August 7th, 2010 at 6:16 PM
sunheri yaado ke ehsas rahne do,
surur dil mei juban par mithas rahne do,
yahi afsana hai jaane ka ,
na khud udas raho or na kisi ko rahne do.
abhi 9837629300
August 7th, 2010 at 6:16 PM
1 Ladka 0r Ladki Car Me Khamoshi Se Ja rahe the,
Ladka 1 Letter Ladki Ko Deta He
Ladki Letter Padne Se Pehle Hi Ladke Ko Kehti He
Ki Mujhe Ab Tum Se pyar Nahi Mai Tumhe Chhod Rhi Hun
achanak Ek Dam se Tez Raftar wali Car Unki Car Se Takra gai
Ladka Usi Waqt Mar gayaa
Ladki Bach gai
Phir Ladki Ne Wo Letter Khola To
Uski Ankhon Se Aansu
Us Letter Pe Gir pade
Us Pe Likha Tha,
“Jis Din Tum Mujhko Chhod Dogi main mar jaunga
abhi 9837629300
August 7th, 2010 at 6:17 PM
1 Question for u
“HUM AAPKE HAI KAUN ”
jawab Film k naam per hona chahieye
sub ko bejho aur dekho kya kya must answer mlte hai……
aour subse phle ek msg mujh ko karo?/////
abhi 9837629300
August 7th, 2010 at 6:18 PM
kahin aasuon ki saugat hogi,
naye log honge nayi baat hogi,
may har mood par muskurata rahunga,
agar aapki mohaabat saath hogi….
abhi 9837629300
August 7th, 2010 at 6:19 PM
chand ho pari ho ya koi afshara
pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara
jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara
me uska “veer” wo meri “zarra”
abhi 9837629300
October 22nd, 2010 at 1:46 PM
vry vry nice………………
October 24th, 2010 at 7:49 AM
gud yar very gud great
October 27th, 2010 at 11:43 AM
Heart touching…
November 1st, 2010 at 10:54 PM
har phool ki ajab kahani hain,
chup rehana pyar ki nishani hain,
koi zakham nahi phir bhi ye ahsas hain,
dilka tukda aaj bhai unke pas hain.
November 10th, 2010 at 11:54 AM
very nice shayri yaar. i like very much. thanx.
November 10th, 2010 at 7:13 PM
2nd one is superb man.
November 21st, 2010 at 1:23 PM
Nahi rakhte hum wafa ki umid kisi se
Hum ne hur dum bewafai jo pai hai
Na dhundo jakhmo k nishan hamare jism par
Hum ne har chot DIL pe khai hai
NishaT 9985860338
November 23rd, 2010 at 1:09 PM
Dil todne ki beshak aadat hai tumhari
mera dil bhi tot jane ki chiz nahi
aye Bewafa sanam tujhe apne payar me dewana na kardu to khdena
k a chora bhi koi chiz nahi
NsihaT 9985860338
November 23rd, 2010 at 9:55 PM
jeet, abhinab and skumar im speechless. fantastico merviglioso, increbible shayari. gud job.
November 29th, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Hum tmam koshisho ke bavjood haar gye,
Wo use mil gya jisne use manga hi ni,
Har ek se pucha uske na milne ka sabab,
Sbne kha-” Wo tere liye bna hi nhi”…..
November 30th, 2010 at 5:02 PM
this is dev..
tumhare gum ki dali uthakar juba pe rakh le hai dekho maine,
ye katra katra pighal rahi hai, mai katra katra hi jee raha hu…
December 1st, 2010 at 1:15 PM
nind ke badalo ke pichhe hai muskuata huaa koi chahera
chahere pe bikhare hui ye reshami lat sar sarata hua koi anchal
or do ankhe heran heran si
nind ke badalo ke pichhe hai ek mulakat ek hasen lamha
jhil ka thaera thahera sa pani paid pe raheti ek chidiya
bag me khilate nanhe nanhe full khubasurat dabi si bat
nind ke badalo ke pichhe hai dopahar ek dhimi dhime
tuatata aina udate kuchh kagaz
tirachu e me tirachu e me bikharata ek paid ka panna
palako pe jhilamilata ek ansoo
gahera sannata sor karata huva nind ke badalo ke pichhe hai
December 1st, 2010 at 8:02 PM
achcha likha he magar agar aapne apna kuch likha hota to zyada behtar lagta………bura mat lagaiyega……..meri aadat he khul k bolne ki
December 2nd, 2010 at 11:50 AM
Do chidiyo ki prem kahani ek din female chidiya ne bola ki muje,
chodker kahi tum ud to nahi jaoge mail chidiya boli ud jaunga to tum
pakad lena female chidiya boli me tumhe pakad sakti hu par fir pa nahi sakti
male chidiya ki ankhon me anshu agaye or usne apne pankh tod diye or
bola ab ham hamesha sath rahenge ek din jor se tufan ane wala tha
to female chidiya udne lagi tabhi male chidiya ne kaha tum ud jao
me nahi ud sakta female chidiya boli apna khyal rakhna
kehkar ud gayi,jab tufan thama to female chidiya
wapas us ped par aai to dekha ki male chidiya mar chuki thi
or ek dali per likha tha kash ek bar to kehti ki me
tumhe nahi chod sakti to shayad me tufan ane se pehle nahi marta
December 2nd, 2010 at 11:51 AM
koi purani yad mera rasta roke mujase kaheti hai
itani jaldi dhup me yu kab tak ghumoge
ao chalake bite dino ki chav me bethe
us lamhe ki bat kare
ki jisame koi full khila tha
us lamhe ki bat kare
jisame kisi avaz ki chandani khanak uthi thi
us lamhe ki bat bat kare jisame kisi ke nazaro ke moaki barase the
koi purani yad mera rasta roke kaheti hai
itani jaldi dhup me kab tak ghumoge
December 12th, 2010 at 5:18 PM
i have no words to explain its really too good……amazing,mindblowing
December 14th, 2010 at 5:32 PM
grt bhai kya likhte ho yaar…
mere sath bhi kuch aisha hi hua hai
December 21st, 2010 at 6:14 PM
realy khuda bhi uska tha,iam very alone without you.
December 22nd, 2010 at 2:56 PM
kabhi pyaar mait karena
December 31st, 2010 at 5:11 PM
hum tumhare hay tumhare sanam
December 31st, 2010 at 11:45 PM
Is so sweet
My thinks is,the love is a path of deth.
January 6th, 2011 at 9:18 PM
Hi Jeet sach kha apne kissi ka dil tod kon apna bacha paya hai.
January 12th, 2011 at 6:27 PM
Anaa ki Jang He To Thi
Judai ko jeet jana tha,
Muhabbat ko moat honi thi
Wafa ny toot jana tha,
Yeh he woh talkh haqeeqat thi
Tumhen bus loat jana tha,
Sitaron sy raat katni thi
Chand ko Doob Jana Tha,
Ek Waqat Tak Dariya ki Rawani Thi
Phir Aankhon ko Sookh Jana Tha,
Tumhen Zindagi Badalni Thi
Hamara Sath Chord Jana Tha.
January 12th, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Bewafa:
Agar Tum Aaeena Dekho To,
Khud se Nazren Chura Lena,
K Aksar Bewafa Logon Ko,
Aankhen Chor Lagti Hain.
February 1st, 2011 at 2:13 PM
Hi, dis z pari..
Tmhari poetry bht pyari h.. I lik it, bht touchng lines h.. I lv d wrds.. Nw i wnt to do frndshp wid u.. Actualy main b poetry likhti hu.. Wil u b my frnd..
February 9th, 2011 at 2:56 PM
Its too good .
February 10th, 2011 at 6:47 PM
Kudrat Ki kayamat me agar raat na hoti, to khyalo me Chi unse mulakat na hoti, Har gam ki wajah ye dil hai agar ye dil na hota to koi baat na hoti
February 17th, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Dude really a nice emotional heart touching lines & d question asked z very very appropriate.
March 15th, 2011 at 10:00 PM
Zamane bhar ki baaton mein hamein na bhula dena,
Jab kabhi yaad aaye to zara sa muskura dena,
Zinda rahe to milenge bar-bar sanam,
Nahi to har Diwali mere naam ka diya jala dena.
April 17th, 2011 at 7:35 AM
Hi yaar,
aapki shayari ka javaab nahi…
kya sher hai aapne likha, lagta hai aapne hamme ek shisha dikha di ho…
April 17th, 2011 at 7:36 AM
kya aap mujhse dosti karna chahate hai…i’m there in orkut…please visit