Comments on: Mein eis shahar mein naya hoan…

By: ruby

ruby — Sun, 27 Mar 2011 08:16:23 +0000

muddat hui thi honth humare sile hue,

kal sham wo mile k unhi se gile hue
wo khe rha hai dard jo bkcha hai jist hai,
jo jkham de chuke hai wafa k sile hue..

By: ruby

ruby — Sun, 27 Mar 2011 08:11:26 +0000

gum ki sarhed se dur nikal
kantoon se bhra hai ye jangal.
her fool bhi ab kanta bank.
jkhmo pe kuresi chubta hai,,,,,,,,

jb yaad tumhari aati hai
dil khoon k anshu roota hai

By: ruby

ruby — Sun, 27 Mar 2011 08:08:45 +0000

very nice dost,,,,,,,,
i like it……

By: meenu

meenu — Mon, 31 Aug 2009 02:15:28 +0000

Hi Vineet, kya khoob kaha hai aapne, hamara bhi yehi kehna hai ki jo jajbati nahi hote vo shayar nahi hote, shayari tou jajbaton se hi likhi ja sakti hai.

By: Vineet kúmar tiwari

Vineet kúmar tiwari — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 02:07:30 +0000

Are dost
hum bhi bade shayarana andaj rakhte h
pr kya kare
dil mein bade jajbat rakhte h.

Suna h k shayar jajbati nahi hote,

mein
kahta hoon ki jo jajbati nahi hote

wo
shayar nahi hote !