Tue 20 Apr 2010
Hi,
I am unable to decide which one is the best. Serious input is welcome.
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Izhare pyar ka ye andaaz nirala hai
Khamosh hai lab per ikrar piyara hai
Saada hoon sadaakat ka maara hoon
Kaise samju kya tera issara hai
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Izhare pyar ka ye andaaz nirala hai
Khamosh hai lab per ikrar piyara hai
Nazre hai juke juki per ankhoo may sharart hai
Tare tasveer nahi to kya tare lafzo ka sahara hai.
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Izhare pyar ka ye andaaz nirala hai
Khamosh hai lab per ikrar piyara hai
Anjan hay safar hamrahi bhi anjan hai
Tare tasveer nahi to kya tare lafzo ka sahara hai.
Thanks
Ajay
April 21st, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Ijhaar-e-mohabbat ka ye andaaz nirala hai
Khamosh labon ne har raaz keh dala hai
Socha tha ikraar ke waqt to vo bolenge
Par juban ka kaam ,Najro ne kar dala hai…
Not a better shayar than u,but just tried.Hope u like it….
April 21st, 2010 at 7:10 PM
Hi
Ijhaar-e-Mohabbat ka ye andaaj nirala hai
Khamosh labon ne har raaj keh dala hai
Socha tha ikrar ke waqt to vo bolenge
Par juban ka kaam to najro ne kar dala hai
I am not a a good shayar like u,but tried something.Hope u like it…..
April 22nd, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Izhare pyar ka ye andaaz nirala hai
Khamosh hai lab per ikrar piyara hai
Saada hoon sadaakat ka maara hoon
Kaise samju kya tera issara hai
April 22nd, 2010 at 12:39 PM
ye teenon men achha laga
April 22nd, 2010 at 11:26 PM
izhaar-e-mohabbat ka, andaaz nirala hay
honton k fasaanay ko, aankhon ne sambhala hay
khamoshe say labon par, ik sard muskurahat
ye raaz sar-e-mehfil, nazron ne uchhala hay
awaara ho gay hain, maghmay bhe meri surat
vb ko tu ne jub say, is dil say nikaala hay
April 23rd, 2010 at 2:54 PM
I like
Izhare pyar ka ye andaaz nirala hai
Khamosh hai lab per ikrar piyara hai
Saada hoon sadaakat ka maara hoon
Kaise samju kya tera issara hai
Its more meaningful….
April 23rd, 2010 at 9:51 PM
*naghmay
April 26th, 2010 at 5:24 PM
3rd one is best
May 2nd, 2010 at 2:44 PM
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June 6th, 2010 at 8:39 PM
my salutes to your shayari friend. i really liked it. your just the best…..
June 16th, 2010 at 2:39 PM
Izhare pyar ka ye andaaz nirala hai
Khamosh hai lab per ikrar piyara hai
Nazre hai juke juki per ankhoo may sharart hai
Tare tasveer nahi to kya tare lafzo ka sahara hai.
June 16th, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Izhare pyar ka ye andaaz nirala hai
Khamosh hai lab per ikrar piyara hai
Nazre hai juke juki per ankhoo may sharart hai
Tare tasveer nahi to kya tare lafzo ka sahara hai.
dis one is d best.. :)